by DianneSalerni | Nov 4, 2013 | First Impressions
November is a month for Robins! Our second First Impressions comes from Robin Hall. This is the first page of her MG fiction titled LIFE IS A TONGUE TWISTER: Ruby woke long before her Hello Kitty alarm beeped. Watching the pink flip-down numbers turn to 5:21, she...
by DianneSalerni | Nov 1, 2013 | First Impressions
Today for First Impressions in November, we have a submission from Robin Richards. This is the first page of her Adult Paranormal Mystery/Romance, OUT OF TOUCH.Until one Saturday morning in July I was only a mildly damaged seven year old kid living in a...
by DianneSalerni | Oct 14, 2013 | First Impressions
We have a special edition of First Impressions today, to help Robin Hall get her new YA contemporary manuscript ready to share. This is the first page of GUTTER GIRL:I rip open a blue Pixy Stix—the same color as my lucky bowling ball and the streak in my hair—and dump...
by DianneSalerni | Oct 7, 2013 | First Impressions
Our third submission for First Impressions is an upper MG humorous fantasy by Carl Hackman, GERALD AND THE AMULET OF ZONRACH.A flash of blinding blue light filled the room, followed by a billowing cloud of dark, acrid smoke. “Oops…” Now this is not the...
by DianneSalerni | Oct 4, 2013 | First Impressions
Our next submission for First Impressions is a return visit from Patricia Moussatche and THE LEGACY OF THE EYE, an adult science fiction novel. Patricia shared her first page of this manuscript with us back in February and has revised it since then.CHAPTER 1David:...
by DianneSalerni | Oct 2, 2013 | First Impressions
Our First Impressions post today comes from Claudette Young. This is the first page of Claudette’s women’s cozy mystery, DREAMIE’S BOX “I have to leave early this morning. I have a breakfast meeting in Westley and won’t be able to drop you at the library. I guess...